V.sharma

 Hi Vibha,  Upon first just scrolling throughout the webpage, the title "Golden Girls" caught my eye, so simple yet draws in the reader to want to know more about what you will be talking about within that paragraph. Your website included detailed information about the older years of women and provided educational videos and infographics. I love that you included the infographic about depression, reading about it isn't always the best as it pertains to mental health but providing things such as infographics with vibrant colors makes me want to read and learn more.  I feel as a women we go through so much emotions but are very good at masking it with a smile, as mothers play so many roles in their children and families lives. The infographic that provided a visual view of how much more women experience depression compared to men, following up with other infographics about preventable measures and techniques all tied in well with the information being provided. My only crit...

  Hi Vibha, I enjoyed navigating through your group’s late adulthood webpage, it was very informative and taught me a few things about what the women in this stage of life deal with from a psychosocial stance. I like how you separated your sections with subheadings and your information into manageable paragraphs, making it easier to follow along and digest the information. The infographic selections were also ideal, because they weren’t just random, but were also very informative. The thing that I loved the most about your webpage was how you not only provided information of the struggles that are faced, but you also provided solutions for those issues.               However, I do have a few suggestions that may help for the next assignment. There were a few grammatical errors throughout. It seemed to be simple mistakes (it’s was used instead of is), so proofreading before submitting would be great. I also noticed...