Feedback Unit 3

 

Hi Vibha,

I enjoyed navigating through your group’s late adulthood webpage, it was very informative and taught me a few things about what the women in this stage of life deal with from a psychosocial stance. I like how you separated your sections with subheadings and your information into manageable paragraphs, making it easier to follow along and digest the information. The infographic selections were also ideal, because they weren’t just random, but were also very informative. The thing that I loved the most about your webpage was how you not only provided information of the struggles that are faced, but you also provided solutions for those issues.

              However, I do have a few suggestions that may help for the next assignment. There were a few grammatical errors throughout. It seemed to be simple mistakes (it’s was used instead of is), so proofreading before submitting would be great. I also noticed that some of the outline was still present on the webpage (i.e. ‘above infographic needs citation’, ‘text here’, and ‘conclusion’). Sometimes we are focusing on making sure that all of the key elements of the assignment are addressed, and it leads to careless mistakes. So, that just goes back to proofreading. Other than that, I enjoyed every bit of this webpage!