Unit 5 Assignment (unit 4 feedback)
Hi Vibha!
I decided to review you and your groups page for unit four conventional medicine. Your blog post hits close to home because my mom has a rare heart defect in addition to A-fib. In your post you mentioned that A-Fib increases the risk of having a stroke, and my mom did have a TIA (transient ischemic attack) a couple years after being diagnosed with this rare heart defect at the age of 47. I have always been a big supporter for cardiac health especially in women and attending the Heart Walk every year that is hosted by the American Heart Association.
Overall, I found your blog page very informative, easy to follow with your headings/subheadings, and not overwhelming to look at. Everything that I read flowed easily and I did not have difficulty understanding the information that was presented. You included all the elements required and I did not come across any spelling or grammatical errors. In addition to the writing, the images and videos were also informative! I found this information very useful as a healthcare provider and even as a 28 year old female. I hope there continues to be more awareness for cardiac health in women to prevent the risk of having CVD.
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