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     Unit five's topic covered complementary medicine, and the group I chose to evaluate was group three who researched adult women. The topic of choice was anxiety and the complementary approach was mindfulness based cognitive behavioral therapy.     The use of headings was pleasing to the eye and allowed readers to grasp what topic they could expect to be covered. The use of infographics and videos was well done, especially the video from Holland Hospital. YouTube can present much information, but knowing it's from an  accredited facility and from medical personnel adds a level of trustworthiness to the media being presented. The use of in-text citations also appears to be correct. I especially enjoyed the infographics on mindfulness meditation and it's benefits as I have been a mindfulness meditator for nearly a decade and have reaped massive benefits from it.      I felt that some sentences were difficult to understand in regards to how t...

 Hi Vibha!      I decided to review you and your groups page for unit four conventional medicine. Your blog post hits close to home because my mom has a rare heart defect in addition to A-fib. In your post you mentioned that A-Fib increases the risk of having a stroke, and my mom did have a TIA (transient ischemic attack) a couple years after being diagnosed with this rare heart defect at the age of 47.  I have always been a big supporter for cardiac health especially in women and attending the Heart Walk every year that is hosted by the American Heart Association.     Overall, I found your blog page very informative, easy to follow with your headings/subheadings, and not overwhelming to look at. Everything that I read flowed easily and I did not have difficulty understanding the information that was presented. You included all the elements required and I did not come across any spelling or grammatical errors. In addition to the writing, the images and...